A friend agreed to look after your pet while yo are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
-give contact details for when you are away
-give instructions of how to care for your pet
-describe other household duties
Dear Jane,
How are you? It’s great that you like to pet my dog for couple of days. I’m writing to let you know that I will be leaving the city on the Monday 23th August. My flight is in the early morning, so I will leave the keys form the front door and the garage under the mat. There is a sticky note on the fridge with the address and number of the hotel that I’m going to stay. Also, in case of emergency, you can always call me on Viber or write me a message as well.
I know that you took care of my dog Tara couple of times in the past and you already know her needs, but these days she is not feel well and the vet advise me to change her daily routines. So instead of taking her to walk in only in the evening, you should take her out twice a day. Also, give her to drink more water than usual.
Anyway, if you have don’t mind you can water my plants once a day. Also, you can take the mail, if any, and put it on the table in the living room. Last but not least, please leave the light in the kitchen always on.
See you soon,
Ivana
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the kitchen always on. See you soon, Ivana
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, if, so, well, mind you, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 3.97695852535 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.74414070542 2.54303337028 69% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599078341014 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5642160198 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3846153846 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0809313281488 0.216113520407 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339200395824 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333685031428 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518662397945 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153682328006 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 70.7449484536 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.51 8.71597938144 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.74 7.59969072165 76% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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