The process diagram elucidates heterogeneous stages which are followed manufactures to consumers for manufacturing and buying products. The major step is fed back fro buyers.
To initiate, raw materials and manufactured components are paramount part of every product. Storage room is a next step where goods are stored and save from moist. After a long time for storing veders commence their product planning which products are to be manufactured. Designing product stage is very important for every company which design will be suitable for market.
Furthermore, assembled productes are transferred for testing and inspecting to inspectoin officer. That is very crusious stage where products can be rejected. After packing the products, they are dispatched for sales, advertising and marketing.
Overall, it is lucid that every instruction has to be fowllowed by manufactures from begin to end.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: FOR_FRO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
...ng products. The major step is fed back fro buyers. To initiate, raw materials an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 33.7804878049 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61029411765 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0285460642 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683823529412 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6633980603 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.3 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.8 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159138096305 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621811526619 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636935177577 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999624623163 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874944044838 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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