Scientist and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artist. To what extent do you agree.
Scientist and techonlogy experts play a vital role in one's individual life.However, One of the most controversial issue today relates to scientist and technology experts are more valued in modern society; than artist and muscians? I completely agree with the statement and give reason for my answer through examples and assertions in the further piece of essay.
The first step to understand, how scientist and technology experts are more valued than artist and muscians?Broadly speaking, the prominent reason is they improved our living standard.Similarly, technology experts and scientist they give us valuable thing which are highly beneficial for us. such as: laptop, vehicles and so on.Likewise, due to this peolpe improve their life. we can cover long distances in few second with the help of vehicles. These gadgets made our life convenient. The survey conducted by hundustan times in which they reveal that scientist and tecnlogy experts increase the development of society which help us in our future life.
Apart from all this, Broadly speaking, the other foremost reason is they makes our lives longer because scientist discover distinct medicines which are help us to away from diseases because many people suffer from seious problems so medicine help us to reduce our problems.Meanwhile, modern agriculture are also the major development in the modern society which help us to eat healthy food. Although people in the past centuries have better health but these gadjets will improve in this century.
To conclusion, scientist and technology experts are the part and parcel of our life.They increase our economy level and give massive development to modern society which may help us in our future life.
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| 2018-10-10 | karan bir | 61 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, similarly, so, while, apart from, broadly speaking, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4014084507 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08588142253 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545774647887 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.8573949575 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.4 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188061081366 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816509943527 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948757946623 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13977727836 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571594874993 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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