Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?‎Students do reading by their own personality is as important as, or more important than reading assigned by ‎teachers.‎

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?‎
Students do reading by their own personality is as important as, or more important than reading assigned by ‎teachers.‎

Nowadays, everybody is aware of the importance of teaching. No one asserts that education is not a very ‎important factor in this era. Two key factors that leads to a better learning are reading, and being able to ‎read journals, and newspapers. There has always been a controversy among different people whether it is ‎important that students read by their own personality or not.‎
The most remarkable demerit of the idea that students also read by their own personality is that they can ‎make mistake in reading different materials, and if no one corrects them, and helps them, they will go in a ‎wrong route which may have bad effect on them. Teachers usually give enough homework, and ‎assignments to students. This personal effort on reading can cause a massive job, and students are prone ‎to be under a lot of pressure which has many side effects.‎
On the other hand, the first and foremost privilege of the idea of self-reading is that it helps students to get ‎more familiar with different materials. This self-reading can improve student’s performance in the class. As ‎a result, he or she feels more confident in the class, and enjoys going to class. According to an experiment ‎which is done in Iran about this topic, twenty five percent of students who attend school do self-reading ‎besides their teacher’s assignments. Among these students, fifteen percent of them achieve a good grade ‎during their exams. More experiments show that these students who have self-reading besides their ‎teacher’s homework have better understanding of literature, and can improve their skills on different fields ‎like mathematic, chemistry, biology. ‎
In addition, another advantage of the aforementioned idea is that students which do self-reading have better ‎self-confidence in compare with their friends. This self-confidence among them leads to a better future ‎which is one of their parents’ desires. In the future, these kind of students can become a president, and ‎council members of the society. This self-confidence is one of the most important skills that students ‎should try to gain during childhood because many of their future works need this characteristic. This skill ‎helps you to do your jobs with more confident, and never think that you are going to lose in this way.‎
To put the issue into perspective, self-reading has many advantages like increasing self-confidence, ‎improving student’s performance in the class, and disadvantages like putting students under pressure ‎which may be harmful for them. In my point of view, the advantages of the idea of self-reading far ‎outweighs its aforementioned under privileges. So it is a reasonable idea for students to follow self-reading ‎besides of their teacher’s homework.‎

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 276, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...r parents' desires. In the future, these kind of students can become a president, and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, may, so, in addition, kind of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2398.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32472580116 2.67179642975 124% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 1.86738351254 589% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 101.642073528 48.9658058833 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.222222222 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300551937573 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987212636726 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596808352212 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183683056343 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375508569731 0.0645574589148 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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