Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Talking about the appreciation and the value of teachers, most of the people suppose that the value of teachers is not as respect as before. In reality, this is a complicated issue, the issue is not only about our social development but also about the public concern with education. From my own perspective, I suppose that nowadays people respect teachers more than before.
Firstly, with the development of social sophisticated, people pay more attention to education rather than other things such as commerce or farming. Parents hope their children receive more education rather than do business, and the nations also prefer to invest in education, let more students study without too much tuition fee. Obviously, in this situation, the population naturally maintain high expectations for teachers. For instance, in China, the parents pay a great amount of money to support their children to the elite school. Because the most famous teachers are in those schools, parents believe the elite teachers not only have the advanced educational methods which could help their children studied efficiently but also have the high morality which will treat the students more kindly.
Secondly, according to the expectations of teachers have improved, the teachers are very different from the traditional ones. They need to meet many necessary conditions to become a qualified teacher. In the past, people would become a teacher directly when they graduated from the college of education. But nowadays, Teachers need to make an effort to get the professional certificate through many teacher qualification exams. The more rigid requirements mean the society takes more appreciated and valued about educators.
Thirdly, education aside, the status of teachers also improved than before. In my parents time, our country(China) encouraged people to do business or do politics rather than became a teacher. So the merchant or the politician would get more reputations than teachers. But now, lots of elites are willing to become a teacher to enhance their reputation so that helping them to get more opportunities to explore social connections. Take my college teacher as an example, my teacher he had a Ph.D. in Germany and he becomes our school's professor when he returned overseas. He also has his own business, lots of his business partners trust him because of his identity which is our school's professor. Teacher in nowadays means responsibly, selflessly and greatly.
In conclusion, I have shown that our society is more appreciated and valued to the teachers according to the attitudes of civics, nations and the status of teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2251.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51715686275 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1629377289 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507352941176 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.1344086022 223% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 214.478696171 48.9658058833 438% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 250.111111111 100.406767564 249% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.3333333333 20.6045352989 220% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.5555555556 5.45110844103 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203251910688 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958212726566 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458152076755 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127995832268 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315517322024 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.2 11.7677419355 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.34 58.1214874552 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 10.1575268817 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 10.9000537634 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.01818996416 126% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.0537634409 199% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.247311828 215% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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