Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. In your letter, include:
-What you bought
-What your problem is
-Why you want a refund
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter regarding the severe problems of your product and service, thus, I demand a full refund of my purchase.
Allow me to elaborate on the issues. I ordered a silver Iphone X, order number IPX0124, on your company’s website with a full online payment about two weeks ago. The phone was delivered to my house in three working days and the package seemed to be in perfect condition as I presumed my Iphone should be a brand new.
However, the excitement stopped when I opened the box. As a person who has many experiences about Iphone, I immediately recognized that It was poorly refurbished. At the back, I spotted several tiny scratches. Also, the color is in gold on the edge that is unmatched with the back plate and looks ridiculous. Finally, the power button seems to be broken as I failed many attempts to turn on the phone.
I called your customer service after experiencing these problems and they offered a replacement. Since then, no further information about my request has been provided. This was my first time shopping at your online store and I am extremely disatisfied by both your product and service. Therefore, I am entitled to demand a full refund as soon as possible.
I am looking forward to receiving your response.
Kind regards,
Truong
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| 2018-10-13 | drtruong92 | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, look, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84444444444 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75234221243 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635555555556 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7370623564 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6666666667 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115115790108 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331027371633 0.0766984524023 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475516694543 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765761056031 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621381016034 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.