Given are bar chart and table explaining the healthcare services and life expectancy in four continents including Asia, America, Australia and Europe. In brief, those two figures show that Japan provides the highest number of hospital beds and has the highest life expectancy among others.
Looking at the detail of the bar chart, Japan accounted 14 hospital beds per thousand of the population, followed by Germany with almost a half of this number by 8 units. On the other hand, the rest of six countries are varied around two to four hospital beds per thousand of the population, which are only a quarter from the total hospital beds in Japan.
Take a closer to the table, it is immediately obvious that government health spending (in dollars) are indirectly proportional with the life expectancy. Although United States have been spending 6,719 dollars, people there just accounted on 78 years old of life expectancy. On the contrary Netherlands and Japan which are apparently spending only a half of US budget, capable of reaching 80 and 83 life expectancy, respectively.
- The bar chart compares consumer spending on six different items in Germany, Italy, France andBritain. 78
- The chart below shows the cost of living averages in two different cities as compared to the national cost of living average Summarize the information by collecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 89
- The char and table below give information about healtcare resources and life expectancy in different countries. 78
- The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, if, look, in brief, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10734463277 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76409217653 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610169491525 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.1960880368 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 129.142857143 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0871751891768 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445871394286 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398099504933 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640882042711 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055197799778 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.