Given are two charts depicting the average of spending in household for a particular country during six decades. It is immediately apparrent that housing and food had been purchased the most among others. In spite of this, during the period there were some significant alternations for all expenditure percentages.
Take a closer to the biggest procurement in the beginning year, housing accounted for almost a third-quarter, this number then declined remarkably into just over a-fifth in the following 60 years. On the contrary, food increased significantly and became 34.0% or three times than ever before.
Turning our attention to other aspects, during the period healthcare, transportation and other expenditures shaped only a little by below a-fifth during and seems had an upward trend accounted 14%, 4.5% and 19.2% respectively in 2010. Despite, education had a declination by 0.3% after six decades and amounted 6.3 %.
- The bar chart compares consumer spending on six different items in Germany, Italy, France andBritain. 78
- The chart below shows the cost of living averages in two different cities as compared to the national cost of living average Summarize the information by collecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 89
- The char and table below give information about healtcare resources and life expectancy in different countries. 78
- The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecades. It is immediately apparrent that housing and food had been purchased the ...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ocurement in the beginning year, housing accounted for almost a third-quarter, th...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...for almost a third-quarter, this number then declined remarkably into just over a-fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, third, in spite of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47916666667 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04038610728 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.75 0.547539520022 137% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8057795254 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.714285714 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.082388035944 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034627793805 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501453357362 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0520537749927 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409355614357 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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