Do you agree or disagree with following statement?
It is easier for parents to raise children than it was 50 years ago.
Properly raising children is the most serious concern of every parent. Besides, human life has considerably changed thanks to technological and industrial advancements. Therefore, when it comes to the question whether raising children is easier than it was 50 years ago, parents adopt spread spectrum of attitudes toward this question depending on their characters and educational backgrounds. On the one hand, there are parents who adhere to belief that they experience more difficulties during raising their children since they do not have enough time to raise them; on the other hand, others believe that several elements have made raising children easier than 50 years ago. As far as I am personally concerned, the later carries further weight since not only does technological advancements aid parent to raise their children easier but also are parent more knowledgeable than past.
Technological advancements greatly assist parents in different stages of children’s development. First, mothers do not have problems which they had in the past during their pregnancy thanks to medical advancements. As a matter a fact, parents can control the healthiness of their children even when he is a fetus inside their wombs or they can abort him if he was not health. Moreover, parents also have not any difficulties when their children are infant since mothers typically hospitalize and learn how to raise their children from nurses. For instance, infants often died due to infectious diseases in the past since their parents didn’t know how to cure them. When their children become older, there are variety of entertaining tools which aid them to raise their children easily. Subsequently, technology make raising children easier than the past.
Today parents are more knowledgeable than past parents. In fact, today parents are educated people who have learned about how to behave with a young child when he is annoying or dissuade rebellious teenager to do harmful activities. For instance, I remember when I was a teenager, I was very rebellious and rude to my family members but my father often discouraged me to behave like that talking regarding the results of my misbehavior. Furthermore, today parents are appreciative regarding their children and their difficulties since they have experienced such difficulties as a result of which they can properly solve their problems and aid them to be successful in their life. Consequently, parents raise children easier than the past since they closely interact with them.
To wrap it up, technological and medical advancements has resolved difficulties which parents, particularly mothers, have had during the early stage of children development. Besides, having more knowledge about children and their behaviors has made raising children easier than the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
...vancements. Therefore, when it comes to the question whether raising children is easier than it was ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2391.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43409090909 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93482140051 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479545454545 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 723.6 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1668739893 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.842105263 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1578947368 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73684210526 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303200175609 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119737593816 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807572933327 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212338833136 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815781449909 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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