There are a few people in the world who believe that Movies and TV shows have more positive effects on children and adolescents than being harmaful for them. The idea that these medias are potentious to affect youngesters in a bad way is based on some true evidences and reasons that I mention them below.
First of all, TV and movies makes you perform no activity but sit and watch. These are one of the main reasons that the children are getting less and less athletically active in their life. They will spend a huge amount of the day just to sit and maybe eat some junk food while watching TV. In contrast to the previous generations who would never stop moving and spent their time running, riding or playing motion games.
Second, as they only stay home and watch TV they become less social. If they spend their time hanging out with friends or go to some public places to meet other people they will have a more prosperity in their life later. If they don't interact with other humans they may encounter serious difficulties in their jobs in the future.
And the last but not least, the movies and TV shows are some entertaining products sold by big companies which are based only on profit and not the health of a community. The only thing that is important for these industries is money and thus they will sacrifice greater assets of a society to increase their profit and not carefully observed for the effects thet have on young people. This makes these medias not even educational but also harmful for the way the children see the world. as we see the new generation have become more vulgar than before and willing to enjoy concepts of war and devastation.
In the end, I should mention that although a lot of people know the negative effects of these media sources on juveniles, but since they are run by the great companies of the world, it has become inevitable for us to use them and even let the children do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, thus, while, in contrast, first of all, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55014326648 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28815534431 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541547277937 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7826397903 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.428571429 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9285714286 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227075883718 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732057588796 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083682609359 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128825791596 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087821121106 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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