One of the most terrific inventions of our era is Internet by no doubts. Since its advent, a lot of people has used Internet as an easy accessible source to get their desired information. Although many people may believe that all the information that is stored on webpages are not fully trustable, I think it is still the best source of information we have right now. In the next paragraphs I will extend this idea by providing more reasons.
The first and maybe the most important reason that Internet is the best provider of information for us is the pace at which we can reach the data we need. Faster access means faster progress. People may eventualy find the information that they are searching for, in other sources such as books or acknowledged people, however, it can get much longer indeed. Within few seconds we can search through an amount of sources equal to the largest libraries in the world which would take weeks, months or even years if we tried to do it manually.
Internet is worldwide and people from different countries with different races, beliefs and cultrual backgrounds provide information on it. Therefore, It will be much easier to investigate a problem from different view points. Distinct interpretion of a main topic would help us to avoid looking at it in a biased way.
The last reason I would like to mention is the opportunity of being online. The live interaction that is made possible by using Internet would benefit us to comment about a topic or read other people opinions about a recently discussed information. We can directly access an author to ask for more clear explanations about a topic or demand further information around it.
These beneficial aspects that Internet provides for us is hardly available in any other form of information sources. Thus, I believe that it is the best source of information in these days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a biased way" with adverb for "biased"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, second, so, still, therefore, thus, i think, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85358255452 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71871070439 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570093457944 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0638297672 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.375 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246982383482 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736799641095 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529530816314 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130409197227 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287720432759 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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