The bar chart depicts the variations in proportion abodes' prices in five distinct countries' states. The time under consideration is from 1990 to 2002 it is compared with house prices in 1896.
Overall, during the first six years, the prices was at considerably low percentage. However, it increased in further given years.
In period of 1990 to 1995, it is vivid that proportion of the accommodation prices was approximately 1.5% in Frankfurt (Germany) but, in Madrid (Spain) it was accounted for one percent, whereas in other states indicated in negative percentile. The London (U.K) and Tokyo (Japan) was remained same at seven percent. whilst, New York city of USA was exactly five percent.
In contrast to, there was only one city which showed the negative average of estates price, that was Tokyo (Japan) figured for five percentile in 1996 to 2002 ,while the city of United Kingdom, London was substantial highest than others. Although, Frankfurt (Spain) decreased to minority of proportion that was one. Eventually, New York and Madrid had minor difference, the accommodation prices was five percent and 4.5% respectively.
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.Discuss both views and give your own opp 61
- Some people believe that children leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? 90
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 67
- The charts below show the percentage water used for different purposed in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The charts below show the percentage water used for different purposed in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...istinct countries states. The time under consideration is from 1990 to 2002 it is...
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...ed in negative percentile. The London U.K and Tokyo Japan was remained same at se...
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...pan was remained same at seven percent. whilst, New York city of USA was exactly five ...
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..., that was Tokyo Japan figured for five percentile in 1996 to 2002 ,while the city of Unit...
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...ured for five percentile in 1996 to 2002 ,while the city of United Kingdom, London...
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...on was substantial highest than others. Although, Frankfurt Spain decreased to minority ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, whereas, while, as to, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22651933702 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80720618783 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602209944751 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 66.349378294 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17634770019 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745429155193 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075205608154 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120242037336 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852246013918 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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