Some students apply for admission only to their first-choice school, while others apply to several schools. Which plan do you agree with, and why? Be sure to include details and examples to support your opinion.
After to their research students often find their dream school. They work hard to get into their dream school. Some even apply only to their dream school in a confidence that they will get admission into it. In my opinion, a student should apply to multiple schools.
First, applying to one school cannot guarantee that a student will get into it. If a student does not get the acceptance however brilliant the academic performance is they might not get into their desired school. Due to increase in population and scarcity of pristine education the acceptance rate has gone down. Therefore, rejection can demoralize students and they might not pursue further education. Applying to multiple schools ensures that a student gets into a school. It might not be their dream school but it might be the one with good programs and equally good as their dream one. Applying to multiple schools ensures that the student is not deprived of the academics.
Secondly, there cannot be only one school that provides courses that attract students. There might be many schools that can provide the same course structure as the dream school of a student. Each year academic schools compete with each other to become better. A student should not get stuck on the idea that the top schools are the best. They might miss out on the good schools if they are stubborn to get into only one.
Finally, a school becomes good by its students. Any good school is in the top because of the efforts made by their students. Therefore, its not only upon the college to gain popularity, its also upon the students to get the college to the top. A good research, extracurricular or a breakthrough can uplift the school’s status. For example, earlier students used to dream of pioneer institution like Oxford or Princeton but today institutes like MIT have proven to be elite classes of institute. Their alumni’s make the elite institutes.
A student should not get disheartened by not getting into dream school. Hard work and focused mind can lead them to their goal. Therefore, they should look into other options and apply to multiple schools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After to their research students often find t...
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ly upon the college to gain popularity, its also upon the students to get the colle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92243767313 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55474058517 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440443213296 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6144889505 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.08 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.44 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240546799605 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888279991466 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568033604601 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16145946392 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521446196003 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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