The graph below shows the way people of Somecountry invested their money during the years 2001 – 2006.
Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.
Write at least 150 words
The bar graph illustrates, the amount of money invested in bonds and stocks way in some country between the year of 2001 and 2006. Units are measured in billions.
Overall, it has been clear from the chart that, investments are escalating over the years. However, in comparison, overwhelming majority of people in the country invested their money in stock market than bonds.
In 2001, the account of share in stocks started with 210 billion, which was almost double than the amount of bonds at 100 billion. The stocks investment increased to 6 billion in 2002 and reached 216 billion by 2003. Similarly, the investments in bonds also surged in the following years such as 123 billion and 157 billion respectively.
As is observed in the graph, there was a dramatic increase in the stocks investments in the next three years. In 2004, the ratio was 289 billion, and 297 billion by 2005, then the final year the amount exceeded 300 billion which is 311 billion. In contrast, there was a steady growth in the bonds investment over the period given. Such as, in 2004 (162 billion) and in 2005 ( 179 billion) while, in the finishing period, the ratio was in 188 billion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stocks'' or 'stock's'?
Suggestion: stocks'; stock's
...the amount of bonds at 100 billion. The stocks investment increased to 6 billion in 20...
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Line 7, column 292, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'bonds'' or 'bond's'?
Suggestion: bonds'; bond's
...trast, there was a steady growth in the bonds investment over the period given. Such ...
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Line 7, column 372, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Such as, in 2004 162 billion and in 2005 179 billion while, in the finishing peri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, similarly, so, then, while, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79207920792 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50698465523 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554455445545 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8011133853 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117909555826 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571181403197 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610605027874 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101515836504 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604442565142 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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