Television has had a mostly positive effect on society.
Television, mostly known as one-eye monster, has been obviously the most effective invention of the century. Although, it takes people away from daily works and motivate some ideas, but totally, I should confess that television has had a mostly positive effect on society. It is the first entertainment of all people. Televisions have many documentary programs that enhance public information. It is a very good environment for advertising and the realm of mass media.
The first and the most popular effect of television in these days is its fun role in our daily life. Many of us, even some people that does not TV watchers, believe that TVs has many spectacular programs as cartoons, series, movies, News, shows, etc. Sometimes a TV night show can gather millions of people sitting in front of it at a specific hour.
Secondly, discussion programs about society problems, politics, environment issues, arts, culture and science are all some example of TVs beneficial effects that helps society to improve public knowledge about different issues. Also, there are some channels like health or learning channels that specifically focuses on these problems. Using these programs, watching them and benefit from these site of TV is depend on our favorites and perhaps on our policy. Every things up to you. Some news channels transmit the world news and provide an up to date back ground for all, as well.
The last but not the least importance of TV is for advertising. Advertising has a wide range and includes commercial, politics, health and even public knowledge branches. Many manufacturers and products use TV to increase their sales. Also, municipalities use TV area to expand and teach some cultures or social rules. Many of us, has learned many health points from clips or animations or instructive sentences shown in the TV. Besides the incremental sale of products, getting familiar with variety of products is enjoyable and beneficial.
Consequently, as other invention in our era, TV has had positive effects on society. All around the world people spend hours in front of TVs to entertain themselves, benefit from its teaching programs and is a proper area for increase sales and improve public information. Although I know its harmful effects, but why not look at the bright side?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: depended
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11968085106 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77227056745 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55585106383 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3036586558 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214098035108 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599523727132 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122320609214 0.0737576698707 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136531138992 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145780051656 0.0645574589148 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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