Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
When it comes to the job, there are myriads of different factors should be taken in to account, but I believe that people should never lose the opportunity of having a secure job in the first situation.
First and foremost, job is a dependent part of a life. It means that you will never be able to live a proper life, only if work hard and have enough income to support your life. These days especially, increasing trend of inflation in bigger cities, you will be needed to have larger source of income to cover all requirements in your own and partner's life. So, having a secure job is a must in every body's life and waiting for a more satisfying one could cause some negative impacts in one's life. For example, last year, I was looking forward to find a proper job because I had been graduated from university. One of my professor in university offered me a job that was not so lucrative in my view but it could be not bad for the first experience. I rejected the suggestion and after that, it took several months to find a proper job. In that period of time I had to borrow money from my friends to pay my loans.
Another prominent reason is that, when you use your opportunities right away and accept the first suggestion; it would be possible for you to get familiar with new people as your colleagues or even customers of your company whom find a better situation through. In other words, making new friends in your work environment, could be a way to reach your main goal which is a satisfying job. For instance, my sister was a teacher assistant in university. She had a minimum wage there. After a short time one of her student asked him to work in his father's company as an engineer with very high income.
Last but not least, sometimes, you will face a situation in the work environment that helps you to have your satisfactory condition in the same work place. For example, I have started an unrelated job in a company because I could not find a proper job related to my major. After a short time, learning new skills and different software enabled me to promote and achieve better position. Know I feel my current job is the satisfactory one, although it was not at first.
In conclusion, people should not lose the opportunity to have a secure job for three main reasons. Job is a crucial part of the life and if you wait to have a best one, you will face financial problems, job environment may provide opportunity to meet new persons, and it would be possible to be satisfied with the first choice, after passing the time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ne could cause some negative impacts in ones life. For example, last year, I was loo...
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Line 3, column 544, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to finding'.
Suggestion: to finding
...ample, last year, I was looking forward to find a proper job because I had been graduat...
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Line 3, column 844, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...al months to find a proper job. In that period of time I had to borrow money from my friends t...
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Line 10, column 158, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...art of the life and if you wait to have a best one, you will face financial probl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48497854077 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55704682396 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476394849785 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 670.5 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0724978311 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316632366075 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991024059524 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847249456036 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217568102389 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778828559709 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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