You recently saw a program on television. You would like to comment on the same.
Write a letter to the satellite channel. In your letter
- Introduce yourself and write the name of the program you are writing about
- Give your comments on the content and quality of the program
- Give suggestion about the program.
Dear Sir,
I am Nilesh Pandey. I am writing in regards to the show “Comedy Circus” which is broadcasted on your channel every Thursday at 9 PM. I am a huge fan of the show and religiously follow every episode of it. However, I am unhappy with the content and language which is being used nowadays.
Earlier, the jokes on the show used to be subtle and at the same time conveyed a message to the society. It used to show which could be viewed by the entire family. Nowadays, it seems that the show moving away from good humour to vulgar contents and in the process is becoming more of an adult show. This really disheartens me a lot.
I would really love to watch the show as it originally was. To do that, I would recommend hiring a new writer for the show as it seems that the old writer is falling short of ideas. I am fully aware that it is easier said then done but it would bring the charm again to the show and also raise the TRP.
I hope that you will take positive and immediate action on this.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Nilesh J Pandey
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...r, I am Nilesh Pandey. I am writing in regards to the show 'Comedy Circus' whic...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...on your channel every Thursday at 9 PM. I am a huge fan of the show and religious...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3786407767 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36054140333 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9994331021 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4285714286 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100000622365 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366490286857 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385622395913 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063451466048 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033783978598 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.