Scientist have been warning for many years that in order to protect the environment people should use less energy.However,most people do not change that ways of thing .what is causing the behaviour?how can people be encourged to change.
Environment play a vital role in human being life and environment is impact to all the all group. According to me, I think that, scientist have umpteen thing are research relate to the environment problem. In my opinion, environment problem are equal to all people. I am disagree with this statement. I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
In the sophisticated era, nowadays, all age group like travelling one to another place.Afterthat, travelling is essential part rather than dweller life because it is travelling according to study, job, holiday and vacation we need to the vehicle. Moreover, there are umpteen transportion system are available in public and private areas. For instance, motorcycle, active, car, bus, van and truck etc.
Nevertheless, there are causing alots pollution in the areas. Furthermore, they could be impact in human being life.They have very detrimental effect to all age group as well as toddler, juvenile, teenager,adoloscent and old so on. Otherwise, there are many types of
pollution like water, noise, air, land and soil pollution etc. As far as, there are plethore causing diseases by the pollution.For instance, depression, cardiac, hypertension and obesity etc.Last but not the least,
I think that, scientist have doing alots research in many can be problem relate any work. In my opinion, they would be equal value to all the citizens because it dwellers should be same way in the society.They could be any kind of problem ralate to the environment are similar to all person.
In summarise,after analysing that issue reckon, there is no denying the fact that some people believe that environment is very indespensable to the dweller life.All person use the technology vehicle in their life.I thing that, environment problem have very demerit to the adoloscent.In my mind, all people could be safe the environment and they are very good impact to the society.Dweller should be care and main
focus in the environment and there are good effect in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, as to, for instance, i think, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20489296636 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06487324189 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532110091743 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 115.730708711 49.4020404114 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 121.571428571 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187961394626 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544744957246 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545730992118 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838784267528 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592937360144 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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