Every individual must realize his or her knowledge about where they want to start their career path. Employees, sometimes, in the first job, can predict their appropriate passion and skill and confirm that they shall stay or find another job. However, Both parties have their reason to the argument that working in the same organization is better than finding other organization for entire life.
To begin with, the masses are work, besides finding money, that they shall follow their hope. Being employed in the same company will stop the creativity if that one is not feeling by working environment there such as the friend, culture, and social. For example, there are some people who do not productivity in under pressure condition, but, in the present job, they work in the busy company which emphasizes its employees for hard working in the tidy schedule and over thinking. If these people still stay at the same companies, it will make them stress and the company would not take any profit. This why we shall not be work at the same company if there is no opportunity for it.
On the other hand, focusing on one subject where we can grow on it also leads to the successful. Many companies offer some training to junior employees because they want these employees to take faster experience and specialize in their department. Year of experience is needed because some type of job must be conducted by a professional worker. For instance, drilling engineer in oil and gas company must need experience people, the owner wants to hire a person who has the long-term of expertise and certification with the same position. According to the illustration, finding a job in any organization is not advocated because it obtains to the type of work.
In conclusion, working in the same organization will produce skilled people with a professional background. And sometimes, people work in any organization because they don’t feel appropriate in their job and want to find their own comfort area.
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 67
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement? 73
- Many governments think that economic progress is most important goal. some people, however, think that other types of progress and equally important for a country. 73
- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. 56
- Differences between countries become less evident each year Nowadays all over the world people share the same fashions advertising brands eating habits and TV channels Do the disadvantages of this trend outweigh the advantages 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99104477612 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7176247934 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534328358209 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2663837002 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.466666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302305876019 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10697708204 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779447214288 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195526364324 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583197663859 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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