many people believe that spending a lot of money on wedding is fine, while others completely disagree. discuss both views and give your own opinion and examples
Humen lifestyle is pampered in the lap of modernity. Presently, some proportion of masses assert that expending a hefty amount of money on the occasion of wedding is good. By contrast, others have conflicting views. Here, I would like to account both the view points with my own perception.
There are manifold points to support the former view. First and foremost, spending money on marriages allow people to enjoy multi activities. For example, people can relish multi cuisine and enjoy with their near and dear ones. Therefore, paying money on wedding occasion fully holds the water. Moreover, people can depicts their status in society by spending a lot of money on marriages. Hence, it is good idea for rich people.
Numerous points can be mentioned in the latter view. Initially, the idea of spending money on marriages is fully wastage of money. For example, in this era of inflation, it is very hard to earn two square meal and people find difficulties to fulfill basic desires such as education, house bills and many more. Thus, it is very hard for destitute people to spend money on wedding. What is more, spending a lot of money is not a good idea to satisfy every person. To justify, people spend money on marriages in order to satisfy their relatives even they do not happy. As a result, spending money on marriages is good for nothing .
To recapitulate, undeniably, people enjoy a lot through weddings.However,i still believe that expending limited money on marriages is worthwhile for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, such as, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97244094488 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70347719194 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555118110236 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0875564204 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1666666667 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1111111111 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25836603433 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082491338704 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045079325399 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153669964397 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026470558206 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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