It is said that people's life now is becoming more and more stressful. What are the causes and how to solve it?
People currently are more under the pressure due to the economy flourish leaps and bounds. There are some reasons behind this point of view and some several solutions should be proposed to reduce this real situation.
There are two primary reasons why people are often exhausted. One reason is that individuals have to face with the hectic schedule to keep abreast of information and improve own knowledge. Because of the state-of-the-art facilities is being offered into daily life and the more competition in the workplace which account for over half of their spare time. Another reason is the duty of supporting a family including taking care of parents and give their offspring a decent education. They have to be consumed with earning money to finance their family.
Feasible solutions should be produced to tackle these aforementioned problems so that people would have a laid-back attitude. The first measure would be people should set aside time to play sport, join in the sports club. It cannot deny the fact that sport not only helps them get into shape but also make them be full of beans. Additionally, individuals should achieve work-life balance. Although money is important, health is believed to be much more crucial.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the stress that individuals are facing to.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12785388128 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65594108752 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65296803653 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5950841084 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3846153846 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101484098737 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391708639702 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456743802854 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055402906928 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324926104774 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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