Nowadays, the importance of teacher is diminishing due to increased availability of alternative resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
It is undisputed that education shows the brightest path to student to accomplish their goals. Presently, people believe that the need of tutors is decreasing at an alarming rate due to the access of different alternative learning sources. This essay intends to discord with the given statement firmly and some logical points will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
There are manifold points to endorse my point of view. First and the foremost, teaching skills and methods of a teacher can not faded by other alternative sources like Google, other learning websites. To demonstrate, teachers are the second guardian to student after their parents. So, they teach them every thing such as difference between right and wrong and provide different techniques of learning which probably help them to get success in their studies and in their life too. Besides that, there are no any other learning sources that create peace and calm environment which certainly fascinate student to learn but there is no doubt that tutor will use all their endeavors to propel student to learn and accomplish a great achievement. For instance, many student go the IELTS learning center to get proper guidelines through tutor instead of reading at home through Internet. Hence, It is clear that, learning about the subject matter through teacher is mandatory.
Further, emphasizing in my point of view, although, other alternative source such as Internet provides the information about different topics related to their subject matters but it does not provide perfect guidelines to learner to reach depth of their subjects.
To recapitulate, I am totally disagree with that statement. Undeniably, alternative sources provide the information to learn but It is clear that, student need tutor as a guide to show them a path which definitely take them to a peak of success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'fade'
Suggestion: fade
...skills and methods of a teacher can not faded by other alternative sources like Googl...
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Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...their life too. Besides that, there are no any other learning sources that create ...
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Line 3, column 793, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to center'
Suggestion: to center
...nce, many student go the IELTS learning center to get proper guidelines through tutor ...
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Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...jects. To recapitulate, I am totally disagree with that statement. Undeniably, altern...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, if, second, so, for instance, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23745819398 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70596878931 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3668306688 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.461538462 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0829280128973 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405272671646 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490784903654 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638886462271 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368241222475 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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