Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled.They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement.To what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled.
They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement.

To what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Now a days, millions of recyclable wastes are discarded and causing detrimental pollution. Some Households states that not an adequate amount of garbage from households is Recycled. On the other hand, the only Process to increase reuse of trash is for authorities to make it a legal policy. In my opinion, collective Number of Trash gathering bins per street and also I believe that educating peoples is necessary.
Firstly, in order to Recycle, Administration needs to make a authorized Requirement and households should abide the law. In the same way, placing trash bins per street makes comfortable for publics to dump the recycle waste. There should be a Characterized trash bins such as: Cardboard boxes, plastic bags, glass bottles and e-waste (Electronic wastes). Finally, By Familiarizing such laws and reuse waste collecting bins can decrease plethora no of pollution’s.
On the other hand, Educating families and children’s are compulsory because some individuals won’t have background knowledge like: were to dump waste. Enlightening people about separation of recycle bags for example: distinct bag for glasses likewise a plastics waste’s etc… Presenting a subjects in an academic levels like, schools and universities by displaying a 2d projection on a screen. Lastly, having a better information can also have an effect on reutilizing and helps protect nature.
In conclusion, although millions of Garbage getting dumped and, causing plethora number of pollution as well as effecting health problems. In my opinion, Its Government tasks to tackle issues like increasing trash bins as well as making recycling a legal requirement Similarly, Educating every individuals are essential.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days, millions of recyclable wastes are disc...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days, millions of recyclable wastes are disc...
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Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'state'.
Suggestion: state
... detrimental pollution. Some Households states that not an adequate amount of garbage ...
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Line 2, column 61, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...o Recycle, Administration needs to make a authorized Requirement and households s...
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Line 2, column 444, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...e collecting bins can decrease plethora no of pollution's. On the other hand...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a plastic' or simply 'plastics'?
Suggestion: a plastic; plastics
...mple: distinct bag for glasses likewise a plastics waste's etc… Presenting a subjects...
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Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a subject' or simply 'subjects'?
Suggestion: a subject; subjects
...a plastics waste's etc… Presenting a subjects in an academic levels like, schools and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, lastly, likewise, similarly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in the same way, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59770114943 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15989998651 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639846743295 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2808306334 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.384615385 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9230769231 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235446066003 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797030968979 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541249000523 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140557479715 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495428765026 0.056905535591 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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