Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that we find young people happier and more energetic than older ones. Young people spend a lot of time for their favorit activities inverse older people serve the minim time for their interests. Contrary to this popular belief there are still those who argue that there is not any difference between young and older people in happiness and enjoying life and having an enjoyable life is just related to people personality and their character's. However, I, to a great extent agree with this idea that young people enjoy life more than older people do.
First and foremost, based on some substantiated psychological facts young people have more ability to risk and exam new things than older people. These features give them the courage to break some unnecessary laws and beliefs that limited people happiness, like a traditional marriage or choose a job. The middle- age people think that it is very late for them to change their usual life but young people always feel free to do this. Older people measuring very decisions from several different angles on the other hand young people think about the impact of their decision after doing this.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that older people are too busy with life responsibilities. They should provide the necessities of their family. They have lots of concerns for the future of their children, for example, saving money for their academic education and insurance for ageing years. Therefore, they just focus on making more and more money to cover all of these needs and ignore their own interests.
Finally, yet importantly, the physical ability and health fade in the years. Young people easily involve in exuberant sports like rock climbing and bond jumping. However, such these sports are harmful and more dangerous for older people, because they lost their maximum physical health. This a fact that young people can sleep very few hours and still handle many different works during the day and because of this fact all of the wise men mentioned that young age as the gold episode of life.
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above, I am convinced that young people enjoy life more than older people do. Because of some psychological and physical and social difference between young and older people.
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- Do you agree or disagree?in the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives 76
- young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their community 76
- Scientists are considering the possibility of sending humans to Mars in the coming decades. Although there have been successful manned missions to the Moon in the 1960s and 1970s, Mars is 150 times further away from Earth than the Moon is. Thus the projec 3
- TPO 47- It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 63
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, for example, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03856041131 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39264926827 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52442159383 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3121990839 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.888888889 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6111111111 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.485973213986 0.236089414692 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182166533351 0.076458572812 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169669187483 0.0737576698707 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323992664882 0.150856017488 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173450950519 0.0645574589148 269% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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