In underdeveloped countries, tourism has disadvantages and it can be said that the opposite as well.
Modern man has raised from the bullock cart age to the computer era at the breakneck speed, by accompanied by vast improvements in the standards of living. so that they have not time for tourism, likewise I will discuss merits and demerits of tourism in the underdeveloped nations.
To begin with, when foreigners come to another countries to visit then they have to pay charges due to which boost the economy of country and that tourist place get name and fame. Moreover, when any person goes to any tourist place, then he gets knowledge about the history and culture of that place. furthermore, Nowadays people get busy in their own life, they donot have time for ralaxation, so that they visit tourist places for the relaxation and spend quality time with their family
On the flip side, people feel envy when well developed citizens come in their place due to their higher living standards furthermore, native of particular area gets attracted towards the country for their good lifestyle.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise, this topic also has mixed bag. But my point of view is tourism is very beneficial for people, because it is a good source of knowledge and tourist places show the history of that region and religion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, well, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89201877934 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49999889793 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.135996539 50.4703680194 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.857142857 104.977214359 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4285714286 20.9669160288 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1428571429 7.25397266985 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0522974686222 0.242375264174 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293275912045 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04970903705 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0397901545904 0.151781067708 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354461211721 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 12.6369458128 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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