What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? Why is this room more important to you than any other room? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
All rooms in apartments are important and have some functions. However, I believe that bedroom is a principal room since the room highly impact on our self-condition. We spend the major part of our time of life in a bed.
To begin with, a bedroom is a base room of a house. I feel this way, for we can eliminate any other room except this. There are rural homes in my country without bathrooms, and it does not prevent from living. The situation with living rooms is the same. Many houses and apartments do not have a living room because there is not enough place for it. Yet this does not put a lot of limitations on living. However, I cannot say this about sleeping rooms because I have never heard about a house without a bedroom. What is more, I am not sure whether a home without a bedroom can be called a home. Another reason comes from the past. If we turn to our ancestors that lived in caves, we can find out that their living place included sleeping room only. As a result, a bedroom is an essential and central room of any house.
In addition, both our feelings and health depends on a sleeping room. Let's start with influences our health. The bedroom significantly affects our sleep's quality. We have to feel safe through the sleep to be able to relax, so the planning of the room is essential. If we do not sleep well, we may suffer from a lack of energy and may others back effects. Besides that, we spend one-third of our lifetime in a bedroom. It is more than in any other place and some of the moments that we experience here have especial value for us. Intimal moments are an example. Thus, the bedroom related to our deep experience and condition.
To summarize, any room can be removed from a house except the sleeping room. Besides that bedroom affects our condition and health. Both of that coupled with moments that we sense in that place make me think that it’s the most important room in a house.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, so, third, thus, well, i feel, in addition, as a result, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44382022472 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41120558742 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480337078652 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.181320411 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.8461538462 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6923076923 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26923076923 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 19.0 4.88709677419 389% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271241183021 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827411180899 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741085731245 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197103962458 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617917584661 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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