Write a letter to your favorite restaurant. Include the following
- Your reason for writing
- What you like about the restaurant
- Suggestions for improvement
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter, in reference to put forth some suggestions which can help to bring some improvements in the service quality of your restaurant.
As you are aware that I have been visiting your restaurant quite often and it is one of my favourite places to dine, due to the fact that the food you serve is simply amazing and delicious,i like the ambience of the restaurant too, as it definitely a differentiating factor from the other places I have visited.
On the other hand, I would like to highlight that the service quality needs to improve, i have noticed while eating at your restaurant that the service offered by your staff is very slow and often the customers have to wait for horribly long hours, thus leading to the cancellation of orders.This has a direct effect on the business and also spoils the reputation of your restaurant.
I am hopeful that the above feedback will be helpful in improving the service quality.
Yours faithfully
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84117647059 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74919931722 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 16.3608247423 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.608469273 44.8134815571 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.6 76.5299724578 215% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 34.0 16.8248392259 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.8 4.34317383033 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292853480254 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136692437999 0.0766984524023 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601691585327 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140340229837 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702456820405 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 8.37731958763 220% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 7.45979381443 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 8.54432989691 183% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.