You are due to start an English language course next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to the manager of the language school, Sally Flannigan. In your letter:
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/her when you think you can start.
Write at least 150 words.
You should spend no more than 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Sally,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing to inform you that I will not be able to attend the English language course next week due to some problems. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate I was looking forward to join this course and improve my speaking skills as I have to speak in public forums but unfortunately my reporting manager has resigned on a short notice. Since the company cannot find a suitable replacement therefore for time being they have passed his responsibilities on me which has increased work pressure drastically in the past few weeks. Although this indirectly means I have been promoted however on the other side I have been allocated additional work responsibilities hence I am unable to start my English course next week.
Furthermore, looking at the present situation I would request you to allow me some time till the things settle down in my office. I believe I will be back to normal phase by the end of June as the management would be able to hire someone by then therefore I would request you to adjust me in a new batch in 1st week of July.
I hope you would accept my suggestion.
Yours sincerely
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sally, Hope you are doing well. I am writing to...
^^^
Line 4, column 36, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to joining'.
Suggestion: to joining
... To elucidate I was looking forward to join this course and improve my speaking ski...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... accept my suggestion. Yours sincerely Said
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, look, so, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63106796117 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74755566223 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621359223301 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0641380993 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297297019958 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115962348317 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098652079036 0.0603063233224 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176593443168 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113723715122 0.0580467560999 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.