Law can change human behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?
The important of law can change human behaviour which was always debatable has now become more controversal. The substantial influence of law can change human behaviour has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent year. It can be agreed that law can change human behaviour by imposing restrictions on certain rules and new updated policy. It regulates the new trends between humans.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why law can change human behaviour but the most conspicious on stem's from the fact that law control the behaviour of society. As an illustration, law can only prohibit people evil behaviour by government force such as due to law people will follow the traffice rules. In addition, law can ensure peace and stability in community fore example, human cannot make a noise after 10pm on week days in sydney. Thus, this is how people follow the rules and regulation to decrease the crime. All human will be awarw for extra fines.
Nevertheless, there remain same drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of law can change human behaviour but the most alarming one is rotted in the fact that law can control but cannot change human behaviour. Law will punish and creat a kind of fear in human. For instance, law limit the people activities and creates ego, fear attitude.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of law can change human behaviour is prominent, although, the way of law can only minimize but cannot change human behaviour permanently should be well handled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cannot change human behaviour. Law will punish and creat a kind of fear in human...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 6.10837438424 327% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00377358491 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58468805034 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524528301887 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4986409625 50.4703680194 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.503711395497 0.242375264174 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203706300431 0.0925447433944 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145239953797 0.071462118173 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3730443674 0.151781067708 246% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047143928879 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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