Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In dev

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , reminders
...any facilities such as learning software,reminders and so on.Thus,I believe technolgy has ...
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...s learning software,reminders and so on.Thus,I believe technolgy has played an impor...
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...arning software,reminders and so on.Thus,I believe technolgy has played an importa...
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...mportant role in simplyfying our lifes. Firstly,as technology evolved access to ...
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...e in simplyfying our lifes. Firstly,as technology evolved access to informatio...
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... access to information as become easier.We have reached a stage where information ...
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Suggestion: For
...on is available at everyones finger tip.For instance,earlier people didnt much have...
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...ble at everyones finger tip.For instance,earlier people didnt much have idea about the s...
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... finger tip.For instance,earlier people didnt much have idea about the side effects o...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...ir medicines and find the effects of it.Moreover,getting education is now not limited by...
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...ines and find the effects of it.Moreover,getting education is now not limited by fincial...
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...eir education in a flexible environment.For example,usually students from developin...
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...on in a flexible environment.For example,usually students from developing countries are ...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...as provided a platform to study further.Therefore,it is fair to say acces to information ...
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Suggestion: , it
...ed a platform to study further.Therefore,it is fair to say acces to information has...
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...as been made earier through technology. Secondly,other mundane facilities like r...
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...earier through technology. Secondly,other mundane facilities like reminder,bookin...
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Suggestion: , booking
...y,other mundane facilities like reminder,booking a cab are all being made easier because...
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Suggestion: For
...being made easier because of technology.For example,earlier people had to wait for ...
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Suggestion: , earlier
...easier because of technology.For example,earlier people had to wait for long hours to ge...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
...same facility is available at door step.Furthermore routine task of can be done very easily...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...same facility is available at door step.Furthermore routine task of can be done very easily...
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Suggestion: For
...very easily with the help of technology.For instance,creating a shopping list,remin...
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Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , creating
...with the help of technology.For instance,creating a shopping list,reminding to buy grocce...
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Suggestion: , reminding
...gy.For instance,creating a shopping list,reminding to buy groccery and so on can be done s...
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Message: Did you mean 'buying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'remind' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: buying
...ance,creating a shopping list,reminding to buy groccery and so on can be done smoothly...
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Suggestion: , over
...elp of technology. On the other hand,over depedency can be harmfull,has we become...
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Suggestion: , has
...ther hand,over depedency can be harmfull,has we become in a very bad shape than befo...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...me in a very bad shape than before when cant use technology.For instance,using calcu...
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...pe than before when cant use technology.For instance,using calculators for doing si...
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...re when cant use technology.For instance,using calculators for doing simple math,lack ...
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...,using calculators for doing simple math,lack of communication and so on.Therefore it...
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...le math,lack of communication and so on.Therefore it important use it wisely as it import...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...le math,lack of communication and so on.Therefore it important use it wisely as it import...
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Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s it important to have balance in life. It is right to conlcude by saying,techno...
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Suggestion: , technology
.... It is right to conlcude by saying,technology has helped shape the human life for bet...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
...hings and it also important to maintain a the line between overuse and use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 331.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43504531722 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.62456435994 2.79657885939 130% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567975830816 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 23.0359550562 287% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 227.914369885 60.3974514979 377% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 359.8 118.986275619 302% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.2 23.4991977007 282% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.8 5.21951772744 609% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 7.80617977528 474% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0738324789664 0.243740707755 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400992139398 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0178748949011 0.0758088955206 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0400992139398 0.150359130593 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178748949011 0.0667264976115 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.3 14.1392134831 264% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.43 48.8420337079 -25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.92365168539 256% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 12.1743820225 258% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.16 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.96 8.38706741573 131% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 11.8971910112 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 11.2143820225 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 11.7820224719 272% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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