SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's original headquarters. Moreover, Middlesburg is a predominately urban area and according to an employee survey, SuperCorp has determined that its workers prefer to live in an area that is not urban. Finally, Corporateville has lower taxes than Middlesburg, making it not only a safer place to work but also a cheaper one. Therefore, Supercorp clearly made the best decision.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on the assumptions and what the implications are if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
In recent years increasing the number of residents and lower tax has made Corporateville preffered location for many . Therefore, author of the passage assume that moving headquaters of SuperCorp from Middlesburg to Corporateville is prudent decision , though author holds a point but many aspects such as authencity of the survey,reason for increase in residents and so on needed to examined before taking further action. Thus,I believe detailed investigation is needed to be done before moving forward with authors conclusion.
Firstly,does sample taken from the employers is representative of entire comapny. For instance, maybe sample is taken from a board committiee meeting focused on reducing the tax of the company,such a sample is flawed and doesnt reflect the entire view of the company. Moreover, survey doesnt mention the backgroung of information of the people. For example,what if survey is taken from the group of people who is has been not brough up in urban area ,in such instance preffering other areas which are not urban is predicitable. Therefore,a proper survey is needed to be conducted beore arriving to a conclusion
Secondly,reason of increase in residents is not indicative measure for superior living.For instance,Corporateville offers education with low tution fee which is why parents with low income opted settled in Corporateville . Furthermore,tax on goods are unpredicitable. it could change yearly,For example,as increase in number of homeowners government decided to increase the tax to meet the demand.
It could be rightly concluded by saying,authors need to check various factors before moving forward with conclusion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 28.8173652695 14% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 55.5748502994 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 2260.96107784 62% => OK
No of words: 244.0 441.139720559 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73770491803 5.12650576532 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.56307096286 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.85559690832 2.78398813304 138% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 204.123752495 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594262295082 0.468620217663 127% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 705.55239521 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59920159681 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 19.7664670659 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 81.0 22.8473053892 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 361.644699794 57.8364921388 625% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 466.666666667 119.503703932 391% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 81.3333333333 23.324526521 349% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 44.0 5.70786347227 771% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.25449101796 552% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109707446858 0.218282227539 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741779684714 0.0743258471296 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535398871997 0.0701772020484 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109707446858 0.128457276422 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 46.3 14.3799401198 322% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -27.66 48.3550499002 -57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.1628742515 254% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 37.2 12.197005988 305% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.2 12.5979740519 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.7 8.32208582834 153% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 98.500998004 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 12.3882235529 246% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.4 11.1389221557 309% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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