Some people think it is of little use to study history; others think learning history helps us prepare for our modern life. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion
There is a contention in circulation that learning history provides a little impact on contemporary days. From my personal point of view, while history learning can be assumed as unnecessary knowledge in some cases, studying history is more likely to help create opportunities for human future development.
On the one hand, in some specific cases, history can be viewed as a waste of time and inapplicable for many reasons. Firstly, history is a process of development in human society, which is a complex and rapid procedure. This eventually offers different perceptions of historical events, which makes history learning less value because it cannot be applied to any scientific researches for further development. Secondly, memorization of days, facts and names is a must in studying history although this information is rarely used in daily life. This wastes a large amount of time and energy because history is something we cannot change which is no longer relevant for today’s life.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that the considerable importance of learning historical events is undeniable. Firstly, learning history greatly helps local citizens, especially children and adults more respect their ancestor and cultivate the pride and loyalty to their countries, which offer their lives as a sacrifice to the evolutionary development of their countries. This is actually a foundation to an exponential growth of a country, where people from all walks of life can live happily and fulfil. Secondly, looking back into historical events gains insights into our mistakes so it can save a lot of time by not making these mistakes again when inventing. For example, in the Vietnam War, the Communist Party learned their mistakes from the previous wars of other revolution of other countries which help weep their enemies out in a short time.
In conclusion, while history sometimes does not give us useful information, we cannot deny the potential importance of some precious sources of history.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33855799373 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9081482907 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583072100313 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9029321984 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243346438017 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857498282045 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451599319211 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154646433328 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323298434074 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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