The given maps illustrate the developments that occured at the seaside resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005.
According to the maps, in 1990 the seaside resort was much greaner rural area with many trees, detached houses, public facilities such a school, hospital and railway station, but during the next 15 years this place witnessed dramatic changes. The most noticable is that almost all of trees were chopped down, small houses were demolished and replaced by multi-storey apartment blocks. Moreover, a new industrial estate with factory, supermarket and airport sprang up there.
Only a few trees near the lake were left. The railway way lengthened and it was located along the coastline. Another interesting development was construction of ferryfonth of the railway station.
Overall, there was a complete transformation of the seaside resort of Templeton, from a rural to a mainly urban area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, then, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33566433566 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82942973919 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699300699301 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.4911677999 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.375 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130114338039 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538554714828 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786752016613 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100877476902 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836607864036 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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