you recently lost your driving licence and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.
How important the licence is to you
Asking how he/she found it
Saying how you would love to thank him/her.
Hi Dave,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for returning my lost driving license.
As I live far from my workplace, I have to drive every day. Thus, having a driving license with me is quite crucial. As well as, driving without a license could have severe legal consequences. Moreover, taking a bus to work is quite exhaustive and time consuming. I was going to get a new license but then I heard from you that you found it.
The last time I saw my license when I drove to mega mall in downtown to purchase grocery. I tried to check at the mall reception on realizing that I missed it. However, I am curious to know where exactly you found it so that I will be extra cautious next time.
Nevertheless, I really appreciate that you went the extra mile to return. And, as token of appreciation, I would like to invite you for dinner at my home. Please let me know about your availability so I can make necessary arrangements accordingly.
Again, thank you very much and I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Sandip Ramani
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Comments
is quite EXHAUSTING/TIRING
is quite EXHAUSTING/TIRING/DEMANDING
instead of will be extra cautious you could say
NEVERTHELESS is not in line w your wording
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, then, thus, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52331606218 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66997789892 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658031088083 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.9869567255 44.8134815571 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.3571428571 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7857142857 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178227200012 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575839050778 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546289487375 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102852825211 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411557580694 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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