You are attending an evening course at a college. Write a letter to administrator of the college.
1. What do you like about the course
2. What the problem did you find when you attend the course
3. What is your suggestion
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards outdated computer equipment in Artificial Intelligence lab.
Now-a-days, AI is the most cutting edge technology in the market, and getting a chance to learn it that too on campus is truly a blessing because I am extremely passionate about it. It will surely put us ahead in the competition when students will apply for employment on competing this course.
However, it is extremely difficult to work with outdated computer accessories as the course demands more advance devices to process complex algorithm, which is a crucial part of learning. As a result, our hands-on practice is severely hampering so we tried to discuss the issue with resource management. Unfortunately, department is struggling with scarcity of fund, as informed by the head of department.
Nevertheless, many business organization, especially in IT sector, usually deprecate their equipment after certain life cycle, which could be of huge help for our college. We can contact them and request them to donate or sale at minimal price that our college can afford.
I look forward to hearing from you and your active involvement in the problem.
Yours faithfully,
Sandip Ramani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, nevertheless, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30303030303 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96173260344 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.717171717172 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3016198421 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0992641726913 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360661215026 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475826387492 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059818667602 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578923282961 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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