The bar chart and the table

Essay topics:

The bar chart and the table

The table and the bar chart show how many percentages of people using the means of transport in Houston, Taxes, their average age, and the amount of CO2 be created from each type of transport.
It can be seen from the table, the most popular form of transport is the car for people who use car without passenger while cyclists and walkers take the less percent. On the other hand, people who quite like travelling on trains or buses have the highest average age of commuters. As in shown in the bar chart, car causes more pollution than that of combination of other means of transport
Looking more closely in the table, we can see that 48% of travellers who go alone use car for your trip and 11% made by people who share a car. By contrast, only 4% people that choose cycle or walk. Public transports are the second most common forms of transport are used to get to work with 37%. In details, young people love to walk or cycle to reach their work with the average age of travellers is 39 while commuters using public transport are, at 47, on average three or four years older than people using cars at 43 or 44.
According to the bar chart, the highest one comes from the car which is driven alone that over 0.3 kilograms per person per kilometre. People going together have fewer CO2 with nearly 0.1 kilograms per person per kilometre. Bus or train spends around from 0 to 0.05 while cyclists and pedestrians do not release CO2 emission in the air.
Overall, we can see car is the most popular vehicles and cause more pollution than others means of transport.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to cycle'
Suggestion: to cycle
...By contrast, only 4% people that choose cycle or walk. Public transports are the seco...
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Line 4, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re. Bus or train spends around from 0 to 0.05 while cyclists and pedestrians do n...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, second, so, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 286.0 196.424390244 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48951048951 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25545887204 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534965034965 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4489850055 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.727272727 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120482854894 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476933731847 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835429570135 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856059892047 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909386627505 0.0819641961636 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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