You have lost your credit card. Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manager to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

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You have lost your credit card. Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manager to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to a recent loss of my credit card and would request to issue a replacement of my credit card while I was travelling.

Let me explain I was in transit from Delhi to Mumbai on a train, it was an overnight journey and I had kept all the important documents including my credit card in the suitcase. The suitcase has a lock on it but when I woke up in the morning I found that someone had broken the lock and taken away the credit card including the blue file in which I had my personal documents were stored. I tried to relocate the file but was unable to do so, hence I have lodged a theft complaint with the local police station.

In this context, I would request you to block my existing card as soon as possible to prevent any unauthorized use and issue a new card. I would request to send the new card at my postal address 34 Crossroad Avenue, London.

I look forward to your immediate assistance.
Yours sincerely
vinshu

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to a recent lo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...omplaint with the local police station. In this context, I would request you to ...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... immediate assistance. Yours sincerely vinshu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35714285714 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51682540026 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593406593407 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.9967447034 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.125 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236360658958 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10044108658 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621020791709 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135970044897 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571482870484 0.0580467560999 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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