You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter1.Explain why you want to take time off work2.Give details of the amount of time you need3.Suggest how

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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
1.Explain why you want to take time off work
2.Give details of the amount of time you need
3.Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to ask for some time off work as I am planning to go on a short vacation with my family.

As you are aware, I have been lately very occupied with some critical projects and now most of these projects are on the closure stage, so I wanted to go on a holiday and rejuvenate my body from the stressful environment. I will also be taking my family along as lately due to professional commitments I haven't been able to spend quality time with them.

Since the projects are almost at a handover stage. I would like to use this time and would need around four days for this short trip. I plan to leave on Wednesday next week and will be back on Saturday.

While I am away, I have already given handover to my peer who has helped me on these critical projects however in the case on an emergency I am always reachable on my cell phone.
I look forward to your approval.
Yours sincerely
Brian

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 305, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ately due to professional commitments I havent been able to spend quality time with th...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ble to spend quality time with them. Since the projects are almost at a handover s...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32596685083 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37648708221 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618784530387 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3826474676 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219241011432 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797344529864 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603954299623 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109286131093 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820231162273 0.0580467560999 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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