Given is a bar chart comparing the scores of 3 teams including team A, B and C over the period of 3 years since 2002.
In general, it is evident that while the data on team A increased, both the figure for team B and team C was a reverse trend. Besides, the socres of team B was the highest compared to the other 2 teams.
Concerning team A, at the beginning at the period, aforementioned team had 5 point in their score before rising to 11 point until 2002. In the next year, there was a quick growth to 35% but team A witnessed a dramatic decrease of 23% at the end of the period.
Regarding team B, in the first year, the figure was highest, at 82 point. But after 2 years, there was a dramatic deline to 43%, which was half of the scores of it at the beginnng. For the rest of the period, the scores of team B went up steadily to 55%.
In term of team C, there was a slight rise from 10 point to 15 point in 2002 and 2003, respectively. Team B exprienced a downward trend to 5 ponit in their score until 2005.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rease of 23% at the end of the period. Regarding team B, in the first year, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, regarding, so, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.05418719212 4.92477711251 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3706714221 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.4989361461 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.3 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136317121224 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675845956641 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383259054695 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956270709242 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384402594057 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.48 61.2550243902 153% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.21 11.4140731707 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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