The question of whether to save or spend money is very controversial topic nowadays, as so many people are struggling with financial worries. While a group of people feel that money should be spent on availability, others still believe to store in future use in bank or savings plan. In the following essay both aspects will be discussed objectively before submitting my personal view.
On the one hand, it is often said that money is one of the way to relax and enjoy life, for instance by shopping and taking holidays .In addition, it is spent on day to day expense like food, daily needs, housing, transportation from our available salary. For instance, expenditures of family which depends on daily wages of the family members. Moreover, people spend money on products and services regardless of the future time as in the sense of worthwhile action.
On the other hand, other people point out that saving money in bank or saving plan secure individual’s future life. Furthermore, after retirement or unemployment , conserved money would help to suffer in critical situation. And this mainly because of the current economic situation. Lastly, people emphasis the need to accumulate wealth during one’s lifetime, so that one’s children could spend their high quality life and academic world regardless of the money in future.
Overall, money plays an important role in individual’s life. This essay discussed why saving money is beneficial whereas for the daily expense it should be spent on availability for easy life style. I tend to agree that it is wiser to save money wherever possible, for reasons which benefit both individuals today and future generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...instance by shopping and taking holidays .In addition, it is spent on day to day e...
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Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...stance by shopping and taking holidays .In addition, it is spent on day to day exp...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ermore, after retirement or unemployment , conserved money would help to suffer in...
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Line 5, column 478, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... academic world regardless of the money in future. Overall, money plays an important r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, so, still, whereas, while, as for, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21245421245 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87796112511 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59706959707 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7021701623 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.461538462 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263352387328 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945617514055 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497301599834 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164894989085 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028736733684 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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