Cybercrime is a widespread concern among the people nowadays, as so many people use technology to store and transmit sensitive data. These are number of problems that people suffer as a result of these crimes, but also some straightforward measure we can take to protect ourselves.
On the one hand ,perhaps the worst problem is the financial impact. Cybercrime includes the majority of financial issue and it happens because of some overlooking s people are not cautions about account identity and their passwords or they don’t take advantages of sophisticated software and procedures. Hence, the would suddenly find account empty. Therefore, this results in disastrous consequences for either people or victim. A further problem is the way in which these stolen money are used subsidize other crime ,such as drug distribution or even terrorism. Finally, there is the problem for nation and victims. Consequently, the initial shock is often followed by months r years or legal wrangling paperwork.
On the other hand, turning to possible solutions, probably the most effective measure is to improve personal security , ranging from passwords to the banking account information. Secondly, people should Raise awareness of the risks among the elderly or the very young-two group who are often specifically targeted-via publicity and public education. Consequently, provision of more trustworthy network system by organization could pave the way of having less crime. For instance, online sites and other private cyber sectors should allow internet banking transaction system provided that the security and the procedures are monitored by them regularly.
To conclude, the problems caused are both financial and social, and the solutions should involve integrated action by individual, authorities and the state.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61594202899 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95128064999 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648550724638 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5168481728 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.714285714 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16824106498 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465097011349 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447952238412 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876081349387 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579577124672 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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