The following opinion was provided in a letter to the editor of a national aeronautics magazine:
“Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. Therefore, we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight."
The opinion in a letter to the editor of a national aeronautics magazine concludes that magazine should invest its resource in unmanned space flight. To draw above conclusion the author of the letter cites that manned space flight is costly and dangerous. furthermore, the author mentions that the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites have demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. I find the argument in the letter not very convincing for various reasons.
Firstly, the author of the letter not mentions how investing more resources in unmanned space flight will help the magazine. Unless the author mentions any such benefit from doing so, the whole argument is pointless. hence the conclusion of the argument is abrupt and useless.
Secondly, The author of the letter assumes that only purpose of the space flights is to gather information. This assumption is completely wrong as there are the lot of purposes other than gathering information such as sending human to other planets for settlement, sending engineering to repair satellites. hence we can't conclude that the manned space flight are not useful.
Finally, The author claims that manned space flight are more costly and dangerous than unmanned space flight. But the author never provides any data to proof or support the claim. Therefore, without a relevent data to support the claim, claim is not at all helpful in drawing the conclusion.
In conclusion, the argument presented in the letter is abrupt, illogical and baseless. The author of the letter should at the very least provide the benefits of investing resources to unmanned space flight. furthermore without the proper support for the assumption and claim made in the argument, the argument merely presents the emotional appeal rather than a strong convincing argument
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Therefore, without a relevent data to support the claim, claim is not at all helpful in drawing the conclusion.
Error: relevent Suggestion: relevant
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 311 350
No. of Characters: 1589 1500
No. of Different Words: 142 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.199 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.109 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.549 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 135 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.917 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.705 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.43 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.68 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.159 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...d space flight is costly and dangerous. furthermore, the author mentions that the recent su...
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Line 1, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thor mentions that the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and sa...
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Line 1, column 594, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot very convincing for various reasons. Firstly, the author of the letter not me...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...ng so, the whole argument is pointless. hence the conclusion of the argument is abrup...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: hence,
...ng so, the whole argument is pointless. hence the conclusion of the argument is abrup...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...nding engineering to repair satellites. hence we cant conclude that the manned space ...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: hence,
...nding engineering to repair satellites. hence we cant conclude that the manned space ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ineering to repair satellites. hence we cant conclude that the manned space flight a...
^^^^
Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the manned space flight are not useful. Finally, The author claims that manned s...
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Line 9, column 208, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...ing resources to unmanned space flight. furthermore without the proper support for the assu...
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Line 9, column 208, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: furthermore,
...ing resources to unmanned space flight. furthermore without the proper support for the assu...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 28.8173652695 38% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 55.5748502994 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 2260.96107784 72% => OK
No of words: 311.0 441.139720559 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23794212219 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6422143591 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 204.123752495 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491961414791 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 705.55239521 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.5924409374 57.8364921388 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8125 119.503703932 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 23.324526521 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 5.70786347227 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346339393797 0.218282227539 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118827787867 0.0743258471296 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112787223454 0.0701772020484 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188686700912 0.128457276422 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135404463722 0.0628817314937 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.3799401198 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.5979740519 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 98.500998004 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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