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...ribe of number Data fitness membership women and men in 1970 to 2000 is fluctu...
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...ership women and men in 1970 to 2000 is fluctuate, but chap had high interest c...
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...ship women and men in 1970 to 2000 is fluctuate, but chap had high interest compared ...
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...s fluctuate, but chap had high interest compared bag. Starting in 1970, peop...
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...rest compared bag. Starting in 1970, people had joined fitness was having 10...
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...ed bag. Starting in 1970, people had joined fitness was having 1000 women and...
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...n and 2000 men. Next, both 1970 and 1975 feminine and male follow gym had same ...
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...t, both 1970 and 1975 feminine and male follow gym had same sharply increase ...
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... feminine and male follow gym had same sharply increase 100%. Women was begin...
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...e and male follow gym had same sharply increase 100%. Women was beginning 100...
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... follow gym had same sharply increase 100%. Women was beginning 1000 to 2000....
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...ply increase 100%. Women was beginning 1000 to 2000. then, fellow 2000 to 4000...
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...00 to 2000. then, fellow 2000 to 4000. next t in 1980, amount people follow sport ...
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...mount people follow sport activity dip. if women around 1800 then man around 250...
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...mount people follow sport activity dip. if women around 1800 then man around 250...
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...sport activity dip. if women around 1800 then man around 2500 members. furthe...
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...1800 then man around 2500 members. furthermore , During the period 1980 to 1985 the c...
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... man around 2500 members. furthermore , During the period 1980 to 1985 the cha...
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...hermore , During the period 1980 to 1985 the chart saw a grow member in gym ar...
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...uring the period 1980 to 1985 the chart saw a grow member in gym around 1800 t...
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... the period 1980 to 1985 the chart saw a grow member in gym around 1800 to 280...
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...rom women. in contract , member of men a reduce around 2500 to 1800. Afterwards the nu...
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...e in 1990. but, men fitness membership in 1995 very large increase amount 2000...
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...ship in 1995 very large increase amount 2000 to 5000 and women round 2000 to 28...
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...significant decrease member of gym from 5000 to 1000 man, and 2800 to 2000 women...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67955801105 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11796398632 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552486187845 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6700818256 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1538461538 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.9230769231 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 46.0 1.69756097561 2710% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214089120745 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887485249142 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959943785917 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174493353752 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087061055588 0.0819641961636 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 61.2550243902 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 10.3012195122 35% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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