Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People believe that gender equality is important nowadays. Therefore, universities should accept equal numbers of males and females in every subject. In my opinion, I completely agree with this statement due to the following reasons.
Firstly, the responsibility of the educational institution is not only to provide professional knowledge but also equip students with practical skills. In other words, in the current education system, the gender gap between different majors is quite wide, and this makes students lost the ability to communicate with the opposite gender. If there are the same number in every subject, students could gain the chance to work with the opposite gender in classes, which would be useful to them in their adult life.
Another reason why universities should enroll equal number of male and female students is that this will help to change the gender stereotype. In current society, for example, we could find that engineering subjects are more popular among male students. This phenomenon could create female students form a misconception that this major is for boys rather than for girls, and refuse to study in this subject even if they are talented. If institutions could ensure every subject has number of pupils from both genders, this stereotype could be broken and collages could cultivate more talented people.
In conclusion, I would say that there will have many positive effects on both students and academy, if education institutions provide equal number of males and females in each major. Students should be encouraged to choose the major based on their interest and capability rather than by their gender.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31558935361 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65858058301 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574144486692 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7155546529 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298996702537 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131625157963 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147139405911 0.0667982634062 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205551646853 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971796172444 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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