There are plenty of options available for spreading news, such as newspapers, radio, TV, Internet and so on. According to your opinion what is the best media to use? Why?
People all the time are keen of news. They enjoy to fallow hot news whether local news or international news. In the past, access to international news was difficult, however, today it does not seems to an issue any more. Today, we have various kinds of media that we can fallow news on them.
From my point of view, today Internet play an essential role in the modern society. The Internet is the best source of information. You can access to every site and every news just by one click. Follow news on the Internet is very easy and free. You never pay money for watching a site, while you have to buy a newspaper.
Besides, news on the Internet all hours of day is available. However, TV or radio broadcast news on especial hours per day. In addition, if you look for an old news for example a news about last election in US, you can use TV or radio. In spite of, you can found any news in the Internet even news that belong for many years ago.
Furthermore, news on the internet rarely manipulated by editors. Although, before broadcast news on TV, radio and newspaper, editor change or edit news.
To sum up, open the all reasons, I think select best media is depend on situation. For example some people who live in far village maybe do not access to Internet or TV. They can just listing to radio or buy a newspaper. Besides, some people are blind so they cannot read newspaper.
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it does not seems to an issue any more.
it does not seem to be an issue any more.
Internet play an essential role
Internet plays an essential role
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To sum up, open the all reasons, I think select best media is depend on situation.
To sum up, open all the reasons, I think selecting best media is depending on situation.
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