The most important specifics of a society always live in the major cities.I fundamentally agree with the statement.For one certain country, major cities are like magnets that they can absorb political, economic, cultural resources of the whole nation.For one study, to begin with, it is also a convenient way to start from major cities that you can grasp a rudimentary clue of the society, that you can go on the expedition with.
FIrstly, the capital, the most important major cities, is the political center of the country. One can learn general political view of the society, which shows the attitude of the people toward both international and tame affairs. Major city like New York, is the economic center of the country.One can understand the economic environment of the nation, through the business phenomenon.Major cities also compose cultural centers, like Xi'an of China. One can see the history of the country by the views of the cities.Walls and statues be 20000 years ago can tell you more about the country.
Secondly, to acknowledge the most essential specifics of the society, one can start from the major cities.Once you land on one country, you probably arrive at the major city, because the more convenient traffic makes you feasible to get there.
It's a little bit harder if you get to one new country when you first arrive at a small city, which is just a minority specimen of the nation.To begin with the study of the society, you can get more resourcefully if you are at major cities.Big library, storing millions of books, would be a better place where you cannot find in small cities.In the library, you can find more books about the society.Major cities are more pleasing to strangers compared with small ones. There are more people in big cities, you can easily find a place suitable for you.Los angeles, for example, are divided into several regions by countries, like K-town, China Town, Little token and other ethnic area.Even you go LA for the first time, you can eat your hometown food with little effort.
Major cities' have a lot of advantage for one want to study the most significant characteristics of the society.However, we can’t ignore the existence of small cities which may contain the other notable features, like african cities, you may study from tribes for the first time.
To begin with one's society study, it is a good choice to start from major cities.It will bring you a good beginning and you may find it is easier to further the study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89622641509 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67679847747 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478773584906 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 23.0359550562 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.718322091 60.3974514979 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 207.6 118.986275619 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.4 23.4991977007 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.21951772744 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394904809241 0.243740707755 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179680007389 0.0831039109588 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803322242738 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234717459389 0.150359130593 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539355095918 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 14.1392134831 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 48.8420337079 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 12.1743820225 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 11.2143820225 168% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.