The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of men and women in various age groups who performed regular physical activity in Australia in 2010.

Overall, proportion of both men and women varied among different age groups between 15 to 65 years who exercise daily. More women performed physical activity on regular basis compared to men in all the age groups except those who were in the younger group. Almost same number of older men and women were engage in regular recreational activity.

More specifically, men in the age group of 15 to 24 years were more involved in regular exercise 52.8% to be exact compared to women(47.7%). On the contrary, women between 25 to 34 years and 55 to 64 years were ahead of men with a difference of 7-8% who did physical activity daily which corresponds to 48.9% and 53% of women whereas, 42.2% and 45.1% of men respectively. While in the age group of 35 to 44 years and 45 to 54 years this difference surged to 10-13%. Approximately 47% of both men and women who were aged 65 years and above were reported of doing exercise daily.

To sum up, the ratio of men and women who performed regular workouts fluctuated among age groups ranging from 15 to 65 years and above.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'engaged'.
Suggestion: engaged
...same number of older men and women were engage in regular recreational activity. Mo...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while, on the contrary, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65887850467 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5969413333 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467289719626 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3524749406 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.777777778 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326108341934 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173623112475 0.103423049105 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989256775918 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260123966251 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990731806725 0.0819641961636 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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