Nowadays, the bickering has common trend amongst youngsters and married people. This has led polygamy and high divorce rates. Justify the response with your positive or negative views.

Submitted by jinsjoy07 on Sun, 12/30/2018 - 02:51

Over the past few years, bickering in society has augmented to a greater extent among youths and married people and this trend is likely to accentuate in the coming years considering the ground realities of the modern cosmopolitan world. This often makes the pathway to broken relationships and polygamy. While some people think that it affects people in a positive way, others maintain that it impacts mankind adversely and further exacerbates relationships. In my opinion, it negatively affects human beings and hinders their survival.

At the outset, there are a number of reasons why bickering often impacts the human beings negatively, but the most preponderant one lies in the fact that it adversely affects the children as they are deprived of the love and affection from their parents. As a tangible example, a research conducted by Yale University on broken family relationships has found 89% of divorced couples states heated arguments and lack of patience as the potent reason for separation

Another pivotal aspect of bickering is lack of time and discussion between the partners. Currently, everyone is busy with his or her life due to various factors like social, personal or official. However, it has been seen that the partners do not want to discuss the things which affect them in any manner. Moreover, less interaction between each other affects them tremendously. Substantially, it is affecting the lives of their children and other dependents as well who face yelling, fighting between their parents on daily basis.

In conclusion, it is evident that bickering has negative impacts on the relationship which not only affect the life of the youngsters but their dependents as well and it is expected that individuals take cognizance of these facts and act for the well being of the society.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19047619048 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83288209651 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598639455782 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.0827527328 50.4703680194 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.727272727 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0942998891601 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332196318498 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285028452029 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.057594880511 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321243275383 0.0609392437508 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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