The diagram explains the way of manufacturing recycled paper from old newspaper.
Overall, the whole process finish in 9 stages, beginning by collecting newspaper and ending up with drying in sun for a whole day.
First of all, the process start with collecting old newspapers and tearing them into a smaller pieces. After that, all the teared pieces are put in a bowl. Nearly for 1 hour, the teared pieces are mixed with 250ml of water. Next, by the use of electric mixer, it is grinded for 45 second. Afterwards, the pulp is put into a tray and added 100ml of water. Again, it is mixed up by hands.
In the following stage, a mesh is used to separate water from pulp. After the separation, a rolling pin is used for making a particular shape. Finally, the paper is kept for drying in sunshine for a complete whole day and it will be ready for use.
- the chart below show the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 73
- The chart below give information on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 projection for 2050. 73
- the charts below show the UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008. 56
- The diagram shows the process of making recycled paper from old newspaper Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and makes comparison where relevant 72
- writing task 1 bar chart 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50641025641 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46022768252 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9790125084 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.9090909091 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11617483412 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480155631977 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814348593911 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103321938226 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10971619436 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.2329268293 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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