the charts below show the UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The bar charts provides the information about UK graduate and postgraduate students after leaving college in 2008.
Overall, the number of graduate students were more than postgraduate students im UK. Further study was the best chosen destination by students,while voluntary work was the least in both categories.
After the completion of bachelor, 29665 graduate students were engaged in higher level education and it was the best destination for every graduate students in 2008. Similarly, the second best option was part-time work. Exactly,17735 students were engaged in part-time work rather than doing full time job. The unemployment rate was likely same as part-time work. Only 3500 students were interested in voluntary work.
It clearly shows the number of postgraduate were less than graduate students. most of the postgraduate students were interested in further study with the number of 2725 students. The number of part-time worker were slightly less than the students who choose further study with the number of 2535 students. There were only few numbers of students who were engaged in voluntary work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, similarly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50289017341 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79810583034 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468208092486 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2149896097 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286819142824 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131250883499 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873463416409 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218253322751 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100774294325 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.